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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi! You might remember me as the person from whom you requested a review back in August!! Here I am now, almost a month later, to give you that review. I am SO sorry for the LONG wait, and I hope that you can forgive me!!

I really liked this chapter. It was full of all the anger and horror that Dom must still feel after her accident, and yet, it still had an air of revenge, a drive to place blame where blame was due. It is a rather nice balance!

Wilson Young is a desperate guy. He's just become a werewolf, and he doesn't really fit in, nor does he have money to get into a better situation. Delilah's bribe was a nasty one--he took it without really being aware of the full repercussions, or perhaps without really thinking about how it could affect other people. He did not make the right decision when he accepted the money, but hopefully he will actually testify against Delilah in court.

Uh oh... The plot thickens!! Dom FINALLY gets to confront Delilah... Aand... It's a cliffie!! I thought that the chapter ended perfectly--with an air of confrontation and suspense! What will happen now? I don't know! :D

I'm sorry to hear that you had a little trouble with this chapter. I'm here to tell you that it was absolutely great, and you shouldn't worry about it. :)

Keep writing wonderfully!

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I don't mind the delay at all, so please don't ask for forgiveness. I know how hectic RL can get =)

I am glad you liked the chapter with all it's anger, revenge etc. It's good to know you found it a nice balance.

Wilson Young is not a very wise man, he is selfish and will do anything without thinking about its repercussions to others. Its good that you got him here.

Yes, I do love cliffys. I am glad you liked the way this chapter ended. A lot of questions will be answered in the next chapter, and then the story will slowly move an inch closer towards its end.

I am so happy to hear you liked the chapter, thank you. I'll come back to re-request for the next!

Thanks!


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