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Review:marauderfan says:
Hello there! I finally got a bit of time to sit down and read this chapter, which is exciting. I really enjoyed it!

I think my favourite part was Hermione's point of view. You wrote her very true to her canon personality, with the added layer of her being a mother as well. I definitely think she'd be the worrying type if her daughter didn't write for a while ;)

I have no idea what to think about Scorpius, I really can't think what happened to him, unless the man he's with transported Rose and Lorcan for some reason and that's why he knows about them. Poor guy though, that's the worst situation! And I was surprised Rose didn't think about Scorpius being missing, when the archaeologists asked her to join them. Shouldn't she be more worried about Scorpius and Dalila? :p Anyway, it looks like exciting things up ahead for Rose - I'm still really curious how she ended up back in time! (Which brings me to the chapter title, and then how you focused on the never ending wicker lines in the chair, which got me thinking about how the wicker chair/lines represent time moving in cycles... which still didn't get me anywhere :p So I'm excited to find out the actual explanation for that haha!)

Wonderful chapter, as always this story is a great read. ♥

Author's Response: Don't worry! The rainforest and internet don't seem to get on well from what you've said!

I'm so glad that you liked that section, because I had so much fun writing. She'll appear more from now on so I hope you enjoy it!

I know, he's just like a lost puppy in this chapter. You have some really great theories about the man, but I can't reveal any more :P Some of the stuff won't even be revealed until the very last chapter! Definitely be more worried for Scorpius right now!

Yay for the analogy, I was worried no one would get it :P All things tie together soon, as more and more is revealed but I won't say any more for now.

Thanks for an amazing review, Kristin!

-Kiana


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