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Review:navyfail says:
The tension and anger in that first chapter was very well written. Rose was so calm yet Scorpius was so furious. They would be quite cute together in my opinion. ;)

Also it is great to see Bethan. I wonder why she is being so polite to Rose but that may be because she is a nice person in general. Lucy and Dave are still annoying in my opinion but maybe they'll work things out and realize that one, 'Dave is being stupid,' and second, 'Lucy shouldn't be near the likes of him and apologize to Rose.'

Andrius doesn't seem as bad as I thought he would be. I hope he takes responsibility for what happened.

There were two grammatical mistakes I caught though I can't seem to find them. Other than that, great chapter!

Update soon.

Author's Response: Hello again Sama,

Thank you! They're almost backwards, the calm Gryffindor and the passionate Slytherin. Bethan will keep cropping up in this story I think, revealing bits about her. I couldn't agree more but I think it'll take some time before that happens I'm afraid.

Oh Andrius, my littlest Malfoy. We'll definitely be seeing more of him.

Okay thanks, I'll go through it at some point and see if I can spot them. The next chapter is in the queue, sorry about the wait again but I hope you enjoy it,

Irish Myth.

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