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Review:Lady of Tears says:
I don't know I wait to keep reading the next chapters. I really love this story, and the thing that gets me every time is your characterization.

I've tried writing Dumbledore with varying degrees of success, but you have him spot on. His wisdom and mannerisms and humor all seems natural. For a chapter that doesn't have a lot of action or movement you kept me interested.

I don't have a lot of critique about this one. I just loved it!

Author's Response: It makes me smile so much to know that you love this story! When you put your heart and soul into something it's scary to send it out into the world, not knowing if people are going to like it or hate it. :) So, thanks for telling me that.

I like how Dumbledore turned out in this chapter, but I can tell you that getting him there was very hard.

Action - your comment made me realize just how very passive this story has been so far. I suppose I should try to get some action in there. LOL.

Thanks so much for a wonderful review! Made me smile.


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