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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Aw, Bill :( Or maybe that should be a smiley face.. He's just so nice. I wish there were people like that out there in the real world... *sigh*

Farmgirl. Seriously. Fred and George. Perfect. My heart ached when they were finishing each other's sentences... so I try not to think about that unfortunate event anyway.

Your descriptions are fabulous as always - very intriguing and highly engrossing. I love the scene you manage to paint and... ah, it's magical.

Hey, don't sweat it if you're not able to update! It's completely okay, it makes us even more excited when we see that you have :) Real life can totally be consuming!

I think I love this part most:

"How can you smile at this time of the morning?" asked Ron incredulously, most of his words coming through a huge yawn.

"Because she's evil," muttered the more awake twin, switching eyes to squint out of in a vain effort to wake up. "People who are chipper this early are very, very evil."


SWEETEST THING EVER!

(only because I sense some major Sadie/Twin stuff coming up...hehe)

But yeah, a fabulous chapter. Keep on writing like this!

Author's Response: Hey! Sorry I'm so slow responding to this wonderful review! Real life still keeps getting in the way of things I want to do.

So glad you liked Bill in this chapter! I was very worried as I was writing him that I was doing it correctly. I really didn't want to make him out of character, but I also really wanted someone to notice Sadie's distress and offer her a little help. And don't give up hope. There ARE people like that. Really, they're out there. Just have faith.

Now I'm blushing from the twin praise. Yup, turning red. It always makes me really happy when people like my twins. And yes, we won't think about a certain event...

Thank you! It was fun playing with the words for this chapter!

And yeah, you've noticed the break from updating, haven't you. I really WANT to write, but must take care of some real life stuff first. Maybe if I work really hard, I can come back to writing sooner than I thought I could.

Oh, you liked my banter from the boys on the stairs! Cool! Thanks so much!

And yes, there might be come Sadie/twins friendship developing sometime in the future. Stay tuned to find out more.

Thanks! You're reviews always make me smile! I hope you keep reading when I come back with more!


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