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Review:Indigo Seas says:
Gah, what a cliffhanger! I love it. And for some reason I really like that Scorpius was the one who is left with this mysterious stranger - I just feel like he's going to handle whatever is ahead of him better than Lorcan or Rose. :P

Anyway, great chapter! Again, your description is just fabulous. I've never been in a sandstorm and I've certainly never been to the deserts of Egypt, but your writing brings the scenery to life. For whatever reason, I really liked your use of the camels, too. Your description of them - especially while they stand in the sandstorm - just made the whole chapter and setting seem very real. So kudos!

Your characters are developing so well. I don't feel like it's rushed but the progression isn't too slow, either. We're learning the characters bit by bit as the story moves on, and I think the pacing you've got here is just great.

I'm really excited to read on! Especially when you leave it like that. I love a good cliffhanger - especially when future chapters have been posted!

xx Rin

Author's Response: I thought so too, because the others would probably run around panicking whereas he manages to remain somewhat level-headed :P

I haven't been in either too, but I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. Watching National Geographic does pay off :P Camels are one of my favourite animal, so I just couldn't resist adding them in!

I'm so glad that you glad the characters as they are dear to me. Haha, that is a bonus of having posted chapters so I hope you like the continuation.

Thanks for another amazing review!

-Kiana


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