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Review:cklls says:
I was intrigued by the summary of this story and read a few reviews that seemed to indicate it was a well-written piece. Therefore, I was disappointed when I began reading the first chapter and found so many punctuation and grammar errors that I just couldn't see past them. Anything that an author puts this much effort into deserves to be done with accuracy in the basics of writing. I urge you to use a beta reader who understands grammar and punctuation. As a (much) older writer/reader, I can tell you that it will make a difference in your future. I wish you luck as you develop your skill.

Author's Response: i have a beta. I finally got her at chapter 13 and chapters 1-13 are being edited. so please carry on reading.

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