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Review:MargaretLane says:
Oh gosh, I didn't even notice that - that if she really doesn't know him, she shouldn't know he's an alcoholic.

And her reference to him as "this werewolf" really shows how she's thinking, in my opinion. She barely seems to see him as human. And her comment about Dominique STILL being taken seriously after being bitten by a werewolf confirms how prejudiced she is.

She really is a horrible woman. Her patronising attitude to Dominique at the beginning of the chapter is just nasty.

And her motivations don't BEGIN to justify what she did.

Really like the ending and how Dominique is beginning to come to terms with what has happened.

I'm really interested to see the full moon and how she'll deal with the effects of that.

Author's Response: Hi there! It's great to see you back for this chapter.

Teddy has a keen eye, he'll notice all sorts of small details ;)

Yeah, Delilah doesn't see werewolves as human which is why she decided to inflict this on Dominique. Very prejudiced indeed. She's like Rita Skeeter and Umbridge xP

It was pretty nasty eh? I loved to write it though, hehe.

Of course, her motivations in no way justify her actions but at least that's what she thinks.

I am glad you liked the ending. The full moon is still 2 chapters away (I think) but yeah xP

Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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