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Review:Bronykatnisshermionie says:
I love how when Dora is sneering at Fionnuala about her not being good enough for Ravenclaw she replies with intelligent sounding answers that seem logical and bright, exactly the right thing for Ravenclaw, and the opposite of what Dora is doing. I don't know if that was deliberately done but it seems clever.
I enjoyed the idea of Slytherins harming the Lupin statue, it seems to be building into something big. Cant wait to read the next chapter!!
Thought the Trials were great as well, well done!!

Author's Response: That actually wasn't entirely deliberate. I mean, I did intend Fionnuala to sound intelligent, because I wanted to show she's smart despite being so scatty and I also wanted to show her scattiness as rather different from Luna's, as they both seem a little otherworldly and I didn't want her to seem just like a replacement Luna, especially since she's not a conspiracy theorist or anything, just rather intelligent and original and tends to lose track of what she's supposed to be doing. I didn't quite mean it as undermining Dora's point, but if it works that way, that's great.

Glad you liked the trials. I'm not a big Quidditch fan, so I can never tell if the Quidditch stuff is interesting or not.

This is also why dramatic stuff like the Slytherins trying to damage the memorial to Lupin tends to get stuck in with Quidditch chapters, because I'm always afraid Quidditch won't be interesting enough on its own or that I won't be able to write enough about it to fill a chapter.


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