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Review:Bronykatnisshermionie says:
I really really like this chapter.
The idea of her ignoring Rasmus,and the way she feels about wanting to beat him is a good contrast to the worry and upset she feels about Blackburn towards the end.
I love the howler, but maybe you could've expanded on the voice, was it male or female??
I can't wait to see how this turns out in their next Transfiguration lesson.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter. It's one of my favourites of this story, so far. Yeah, basically I just like torturing my characters. *laughs*

I didn't think of mentioning whether the voice was male or female. That's not a bad idea, actually. It did occur to me it's a bit of an unsolved mystery, as to who was actually speaking. It's not meant to really matter. It's just meant to be somebody who objects to werewolves and the real point is its affect, but I might see if I can slip in a hint as to the personality behind it at some point. Thanks for the suggestion.

That argument between Rose and Rasmus wasn't planned at all. For some reason, Rose just decided she wanted to fight with everybody in chapter five. *laughs* So then I had to figure out how to make them make up. I already had the Howler thing planned, so I thought that might sort things out between them.

Thanks again for your reviews. I'm always really pleased to get them.


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