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Review:toomanycurls says:
First review on this chapter?!?! Only if I read and review fast. ^_^

Sadie breaks my heart (in a very moving, well written way). It's so sad she hasn't had a friend. She needs some good ole fashioned happiness and friends.

Descriptions of people sleeping always makes me giggle. The way they're sleeping fits with their personality - reserveed and introvert versus bold and very extrovert.

The memory of Sadie riding with her brother Archie was very touching - sounded like a memory any kid would have from a happy childhood.

marks? What are the marks from!?! cruel, cruel narrative building tension and curiosity.

I agree - morning people may be evil. ^_^

I can imagine how overwhelming it would be to walk into the Weasley family dynamic. eee!

It made me glad that Fred and George could see past her wall of self-reliance. I hope they continue to push her to rely on others.

Oh man, the Quidditch World Cup must have been a nightmare. You describe the anxiety and fear she must have felt very effectively.

I really like Bill's concern for Sadie. I like that he's empathetic and elder brotherly towards her. The way he tries to comfort her about not liking the game is very sweet. i like the relationship they're building. Aww, I like that she sees Bill as a similar figure to her eldest brother. That makes me happy.

ah, will she go through the death eater riots? I hope she asks Harry about his scar.

This was an awesome chapter and well worth the wait. ^_^

Author's Response: Okay, the fact that you are rushing to read and be the first to review - totally making me beyond happy. Makes me feel like people actually want to read my story instead of just me begging for reviews.

I've been writing Sadie for so long, she's probably a lot closer to my heart than a fictional character should be, especially one of my own creation. But, it still makes me feel so good when others tell me they are connecting to her. Makes me feel like maybe this story that got stuck in my head about her means something to others as well, and I wasn't insane to post it.

And don't worry. I plan to let her have a few good friends. :) Though I don't imagine she'll ever be a real social butterfly.

You are a perceptive reader! I like perceptive readers, makes my hint dropping much easier. But, it also keeps me on my toes. I'll have to be careful what information I drop cause I know you'll pick it up.

I think it would be a blast to walk into the Weasleys, but I come from a family that's loud and jokes like that. I imagine it would be really hard for someone like Sadie.

The twins will be very important to Sadie, trust me.

It took me a while to figure out how to show what upset Sadie about the Cup. Living in NYC, she couldn't have had a problem with crowds alone, but I knew in my heart the Cup would be traumatic for her. Finally realized it was the fact it was a MAGICAL crowd that got to her.

Also glad you liked Bill. He gave me a bit of a struggle, figuring out how he would approach Sadie. Then I figured Sadie would connect with him because of Archie.

Death Eater riots? Have to come back and see when the next chapter gets up. And I imagine at some point there will be a nice conversation between Harry and Sadie - but maybe when he can understand her better.

Thank you so much! This review was amazing!


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