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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Hi again Susan.

I feel like copying and pasting everything I said in the other review, to this one. But even those words and anything else I ramble in this will never be enough to express my feelings towards this piece. So give me a second while I search up more synonyms for "perfect, flawless, beauty, and art."

I think they should just add "Violet Gryffindor" underneath all of that.

Regulus. The poor soul. I simply adored the use of the word "star" in this piece. Throughout it carried and eerie sort of light and was poetic. You kept the darkness intact and whole and again, this was beautiful.

You way with words is something I admire, and now strive for. It's angelic and fascinating the way you depict things. You show in your writing that you don't necessarily need a pairing, stuff doesn't have to do with romance - you can make a piece pure words and it will take the reader's breath away.

Like you did with me.

I don't have any more praise for you, because anything I say will never be enough. Just keep on writing wonderfully like this and yeah. Just keep up the great work!

Author's Response: *blushes* Oh my, how do I respond to this? You're much too kind. Thank you!

That's a good point about Regulus as the star, how he shines in the darkness that surrounds him. Yet he's that distant star that's almost invisible - perhaps like an old star, burning itself up (though that more accurately describes Sirius), or like a very faint star that, one day, just fades away, its absence never noted. In either case, the darkness wins, consuming the pinpricks of light that are never strong enough to fight it off. You've described it much better - I love that image you've created of the eerie light and intact darkness.

When I get the chance to write a non-romance story, I love taking it - there's so much more to write about, in spite of what's popular. It's fantastic to hear that you found this story breathtaking. ^_^

Thank you for another lovely review! It means a lot that you've enjoyed these stories so much.


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