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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:

I've been looking forward to reading some of your work, because I am in love with your graphics. It was tough to choose what to read at first so I finally chose a one shot, trusting myself to make through all of them on your author's page by today. Hopefully.

I feel like you've painted this scene so well. You're an artist not only with images and stocks, but with words too Susan. The way your words flow into one another is magical, and your description is flawless.

I love the depth you gave Lily in this. I enjoyed her inner dialogue most - it was perfect and comical yet heart breaking too at times.

You showed their not-yet-established relationship beautifully and didn't take away from it.

Your beginning was so well written - heck, everything was perfect. You had me into it from the start and my jaw is still dropped at what you conveyed.

I loved it. This piecce is the equivalent to flawless beauty. It's...heavenly. I literally have no words for you because m'dear this is fabulous.

A great one shot! :)


Author's Response: Hi Nadia! Thank you for reading and reviewing this story, as well for the compliments. It's lovely to hear that you also like my graphics. :D I'm afraid that there is a lot on my author's page, so please don't feel like you need to make it through them all - much of the older stuff is... practice *hides*.

Oh, it's wonderful to hear these things about the story - Lily's characterization, her inner dialogue, the imagery, the strangeness of their not-yet-relationship are all the things I wanted to work through and build into this story. Thank you for your compliments - it means so much to hear them. ^_^

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