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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Review Tag!

This is a really nice oneshot! You have Luna's characterisation down perfectly. I don't think I've quite seen such a good portrayal of her in fanfiction xD She has such the right mix of whimsy and frankness, which I love.

I also really like Mortimer! Since we all know Luna ends up with Rolf Scamander nobody really bothers to write her with anyone else, especially not OC's. Mortimer is nicely opposite to her in that he doesn't like anything 'weird,' which I suspect to be because he's a Squib and was denied the chance to be 'weird,' but he's also rather eccentric himself in a way that suits Luna very well. It's neat characterisation :)

Your prose was very good, I liked how Luna's mind often wandered and she consistantly had that dreamy outlook. It made for a very pleasant read, and I wouldn't mind at all if you decided to continue this xD

Great job!

Author's Response: Eeep! Thank you! This was the first time I ever dared to write Luna - and I was worried because it's quite difficult to get the balance of dreamy and direct, especially getting inside her head and writing 1st person - so I'm really flattered that you liked my portrayal of her so much.

This story was written for a challenge in which Luna meets an OC (which was fun because you're totally right - I haven't seen much other stuff focusing on Luna meeting OC's) so I decided to make him as opposite to Luna as possible, and really pretentious, but still secretly eccentric like she is. I'm so happy you liked him!

Thanks so much for your compliments, this was such a kind review! ♥


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