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Review:academica says:
Hello! I popped by for another chapter :)

I really love how you're able to write an emotional story full of interesting details even if the main character never escapes the confines of her own house (at least to date). It's clear that Pansy has begun to succumb to the effects of her solitude; it's so sad to imagine her wandering around her house all alone, to the point where her own reflection is her best company.

I love the focus on Draco in this chapter. You have to wonder what exactly went wrong between him and Pansy because all we know is that they were ostensibly together in sixth year and then he shows up with Astoria in the future at King's Cross. It was especially refreshing to see Pansy use her wit to try to recapture him by brewing Amortentia. At first I thought she was going to try to sneak him some in order to get that feeling of being loved and adored again, but it's even more desperate that she just uses it to capture his scent and relive their time together. I wonder if they'll meet again soon or if house arrest and other issues will keep them apart.

I can tell you had a lot of patience with this chapter in terms of carefully describing the potion-making process and Pansy's experiences alone in her house. I'm sort of jealous of your attention to detail, because it makes the story easy to follow and interesting.

Very nice work! I hope to visit again soon :)

-Amanda

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