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Review:navyfail says:
I haven't read the Midnight Run series so I wouldn't know who Lucy and Hilarion are.

I have to say I always love a quidditch story. And Percy's daughter being the keeper? Well, that just makes things a whole lot more interesting. The hairdo bit is interesting. I do get what she means by standing out and all. I also like that you can see Moly's passion to Quidditch.

Second off, kudos to you on point of view switching. Sometimes it gets a little confusing when authors do that but you managed to pull that off very well.

The ending has got me waiting for more. And I wonder who this Mariah is? *winkwinknudgenudge*

10/10
~Sama

Author's Response: That's okay, you don't need to have read the rest to follow this story. Hopefully. If I'm ever unclear about a backstory, just poke me in a review and I'll fix it. Lucy and Hilarion's story is in "Sparks", if you do want to read it. :)

I think Percy would really love having a kid who's talented at Quidditch. He seems to be the only Weasley with a lot of interest in the sport but no talent, the poor guy. Molly likes to be a leader. She has a talent for it, but it's also a facet of herself she finds appealing and likes to focus on. She does love Quidditch.

Thank you! I like featuring several points of view in a third-person, and I try to make it obvious when switching without being obtrusive.

Mariah will be coming soon ;) Thank you so much for the kind review, I'm glad you like the story so far!


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