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Review:navyfail says:
Hey Rachel! I saw that the second chapter is up so I thought I would have a look. :)

First off, Freddy is adorable. I mean he is manly and all but to me he is very sweet. He has a very outgoing and mischievous personality. Also I like that you added in some information about her past and how she ended up here. I am in the same boat with her when it comes to British foods and words. I actually never noticed the jam and jelly thing before. P

One thing I noticed: "His finger lightly tickled the pair on the portrait." I think 'pair' was supposed to be 'pear.'

Also this line, "A series of unfortunate events," reminds me of this book series I read as a kid, haha.

Overall, nice chapter. Though I do wish to see more of James.


Author's Response: Hello there!!

Thank you so much for reading the second chapter! Yay! I'm glad you like Freddy. He's my absolute favorite to write! I wish I knew a Freddy in my life. I'm going to sprinkle in her past throughout the chapters, so this is only the beginning of all the information(: Ahh thank you! I will fix that pronto! You're right, it is a book series! I hadn't noticed when I first wrote the chapter. I'll go back and credit it! There's plenty of James to come, don't you worry!

Thank you for the lovely review!

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