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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
So first of all I should probably apologise for the virtual throwing of my book at you...sorry!

This was such a good chapter! Not that I haven't loved this story from the start but I can see such a difference in your writing in the later chapters of this story. It's really amazing how much your style has developed, you should be proud :)

I think it's so realistic how you had Draco and Hermione admit their feelings but then not have them become a couple (as sad as this makes me) it's definitely something that is true to their characters and makes your story very different to other Dramiones.

Looking forward to the alternating stories as I love both this and WTTB. Just don't make me wait too long, okay?

Author's Response: Dee, I've been dodging watermelons this whole month ;) I don't mind a virtual Half Blood Prince book being thrown at me... It's a good addition to my collection.

I am proud! And I'm so glad you noticed that change... Where the Dust Blows in general has really changed my writing - I really try to focus on description now. It's really hard writing in third person but I try to make it as great of a reading experience as I possibly can.

Eeep! That's a big compliment :D I really want them to stay in character, especially now in the later chapters as the chapters before were very OOC and not very good.

Dee, you make my day everyday. I love you for leaving these reviews and really sticking with me.

I'll try to get writing... the next chapter of WTDB should be sent today :)

Thanks so much m'dear!


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