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Review:Indigo Seas says:
Gah, you're story is developing brilliantly! I really love where you took the reader in this chapter, and you're unraveling it all at a really great pace.

I also feel like your Scorpius has a really deep character history, and I've only just met him, really. He's a different Scorpius than a lot of people write: he's quieter, more reserved, and, actually, smarter. I LOVE that his curse-breaking job isn't as crazy awesome as everybody seems to write it. I mean, yes, he's in Egypt, but it seems like it's more intellectual-filled than just simply action. That's a super unique take on things, and I love it.

And your descriptions! I'll just say it again even though I know I mentioned it before. I don't know if you've ever been to Egypt, but you describe it in such a relate-able and believable way. It's great that I can picture everything so clearly, especially because you're writing about such an exotic climate.

Epic.

xx Rin

Author's Response: Aw, thank you again for such an amazing review!

I'm so glad that you loved Scorpius because I think he's my favourite character to write in this so it means a lot to me! I'm glad that you found that this Scorpius was different to others because I thought it would be fun to put a spin on things! I sort of based the intellectualness on me because I would prefer that to action :P

I haven't been to Egypt, but I've been to Morocco which is a north African country to, so hopefully it's close enough! I'm glad that you're enjoying them, as it means a lot as I always struggle with it!

Thanks for a fabulous review, Rin!

-Kiana


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