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Review:teh tarik says:
AD! ♥

It's been so long since I caught up on The Worst, but here I am again for your latest chapter. Wow, you've definitely built up so much suspense in this chapter; I love the confrontation with Wilson Young. It was a very striking scene, and I love that you went into a bit of detail to describe the dilapidated state of his life and his shabby living conditions in that crumbling old bungalow in the countryside. Wilson is such a pathetic person, who has a very ambiguous moral compass, (especially when it's revealed that he simply agreed to bite Dominique and ruin her whole life for nothing more than a handful of Galleons) which is always something that makes characters more complex in any story.

I love how fiercely protective Teddy is of Dom in this fic. His hair was flaming red and his eyes black with fury. Woah, this is such a vivid image; I love it! And it's great to see Dom not fighting against his support and the two of them working things out between them, and how to bring down Delilah. Speaking of Delilah, that woman is vile. Hmm, I'm not exactly sure what her motives are yet, but it will definitely be interesting to find out what drives her, and whether she has some sort of personal grudge against Dom or if her actions are merely part of something much bigger. And of course, you had to end on a cliffhanger! :P With Dom about to confront Delilah! I'm going to guess that this confrontation won't be as easy as the one she had with Wilson young; Wilson is a weak person with shifting loyalties and who only cares about his own wellbeing and safety, while Delilah is in a position of power.

Anyway, this was such an exciting chapter, AD! it was very well-paced and I love the combination of action, new character introduction, dialogue and interactions between Teddy and Dom. Great work with this one; I can't wait to read the next chapter (so get down to writing it! :P). You and your cliffhangers!

teh

Author's Response: Hey Teh!! Your reviews always make me so happy, thank you!

I am glad you got a chance to read the latest chapter and give your feedback =) The confrontation with Wilson was slightly tricky to write so I am pleased you liked it, and enjoyed the scene description and such. I felt like describing his lifestyle would give his character a certain background =) Indeed, he is a complex character.

I am happy you're liking my Teddy and the way he is with Dom. And of course, Dom can't do much without him by her side. Delilah is horrible yes, but you'll be getting to know her motives in the next chapter (which is already in the queue). I hope you're satisfied with them. The confrontation with Delilah is definitely not going to be easy, and it certainly wasn't easy to write so I am very unsure about it, and I'd love to know what you think of it when you read the next chapter!

Thanks so much for all your lovely comments. I am glad you're liking the story and the chapter. Thanks!


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