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Review:BLONDEbehaviour says:
Hi Kiana :)

I'm sorry that I have taken a bit to get to this, and I'm sorry if this review is a bit off, I'm a bit out of it tonight! But I wanted to get the reviews done, so hopefully its okay :)

I enjoyed this chapter! The myths were fascinating! I cannot wait for Rose to begin on her journey, I am so so so intrigued as to how it goes and what they find! Ooo, I'm excited to read more now!

I loved how we saw it from Scorpius' p.o.v. It gave us more insight into this new character that seems so important to Rose and in her life. I like him!!

I think you have done well with the flow and pace of the scenes, especially with the dinner scene. Your description of the dinner was well done, and worked in well with the story :)You have made them all easy to follow :)

I LOVED Rashidi!! He reminded me so much of that real funny grandfather figure- knowledgeable, easy-tempered and funny. He's witty and fun, and I can't wait to see what he has to contribute to the journey. I can see him being a great asset to the story, and his knowledge will be super interesting. And I think you introduced him just enough to not be too much of an overload of new information :)

All in all, this is such an interesting story! I'm really enjoying it! Keep em requests coming :)

Grace x

Author's Response: Hey Grace!

No of course it's not ok, in fact, I will complain. Lol! Just joking! It's more than fine I know what it's like having a review thread myself :)

I'm so glad that I made you excited about this chapter, as it was so much fun to write with everything changing. I'm glad that Scorpius' POV worked for you as it becomes more of a regular occurrence after this chapter :)

I'm so glad that the pace/flow/description was fine because they always seem so minor but have a much greater impact than people think.

I love him too, we should make a fan club or something! You got exactly how I wanted him to appear which is really great and I'm glad that I didn't overload you wit information!

I will most definitely keep the requests coming! :D Thanks for an awesome review!

-Kiana


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