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Review:Sharvi says:
Heyo! First of all- that fight scene was completely amazing! Really truly great. And the ending with Narcissa and what I think was fiendfyre was spectacular. While reading it I was wondering how she would stop the fire because Crabbe couldn't in the Room of Requirement. I can totally imagine an old Black giving the locket to Narcissa, and telling her to keep it safe from her deranged sister!

I also found the way you portrayed Narcissa as this really calm and collected woman, who at all times is in control of her emotion so true to what she seemed like in the books.

And the extremely one-sided conversation between Astoria and Daphne was hilarious! "Interrupt our lovemaking because his drink was empty and he wanted a refill? ... Am I that boring? HAHAHA!

Finally Draco comes to the rescue and I wonder how Astoria and Daphne will react to Draco's story (I hope he tells them the whole truth!)

Cannot wait for the next chapter!! =)

Author's Response: Hi!

I really enjoy writing fight scenes, so I'm glad you liked this one. The locket essentially contained a form a Fiendfyre invented by one of Draco's ancestors that was bound to the locket and controllable by whoever possessed it. I thought that would be a perfect "family heirloom" for the noble and demented House of Black. I think of Narcissa as a very powerful woman whose upbringing gave her that imperturbable air.

I really debated whether to include the section with Daphne and Astoria, so I'm glad you liked it. I've included sections for both Draco and Astoria in every chapter so far, so it would have felt weird to leave her out of this one.

Draco is on his way. Will he come to the rescue? Find out soon. ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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