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Review:Addison Pickett. says:
Good lord, I haven't read a great Al/OC story just like this one (I don't mean carbon copy, but as great quality as this) since Who Knew by the Unwritten Girl. Sure there were other good stories, but I think this one takes the cake. The relationships between the characters aren't stereotypical. The characters do not good guy/bad guy sort of qualities. And, excuse my pop culture reference, you give meaning to the term "blurred lines." No one is a hero, no one is a villain. And that is why I love this story so much (as well as the character of Pickett. Sorry, I have a thing for minor characters, Seamus, Oliver, and Hugo Weasley, just to name a few)

Congrats on the Dobbys. I'm new to HPFF, but I understand this is huge deal. So congratulations. Also, a virtual kiss to Pickett. (I LOVE HIM SO DAMN MUCH!)

Speaking of Pickett... we need more of him. Perhaps shirtless. Or perhaps together with Dominique. Perhaps even both.

GAH! I JUST LOVE HIM!

Shirtless Pickett is just a suggestion, but it would still be nice to read about him.

Also, I'd like to thank you for giving me two new OTPs. Clembus (Almence?) and Domkett (Picinique? Wait, that sounds like picnic. Oh well.)

Thanks for reading my review sweetie. (I have a habit of calling people sweetie.) And have a happy life.

Author's Response: Wah, thank you so much! Breaking archetypes is what I love to do most. I get so frustrated with teen archetypes, too. This is a story from the mean girl's point of view but she isn't so mean as much as a combination of cynicism, ambition, and her own philosophies--and that's the point. There's much more dimension to people than good girls always being the voice of reason or bad girls always being moralless and vindictive. Everyone makes mistakes, everyone bleeds, both sides of a conflict can make sense.

I love my minor characters the most too :') my first HP love is Oliver. He takes off his shirt a lot in my first fic. I had a lot of priorities back then. Pickett is mah darling in this story, but I have a feeling if he tries to take off his shirt, he'd somehow get stuck. Which is more ogling for everyone else, I suppose :'D

OH MY GOD, PICINIQUE IS THE BEST SHIPNAME I'VE HEARD FOR THEM YET. NO I LOVE PUNNY SHIP NAMES. I LOVE PUNS. AHHH.

♥ and thank you for reading my fic!


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