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Review:Leonore says:
I love the way you think through all the details. The plot really builds up nicely. And well done - the grammar in these last two chapters is so much better than it was earlier on - I can't pick out anything to correct, grammar or typos!

I have no idea how you can manage to remember so much going on at the same time (have you got a list of who's dead and who's alive, who's alive presumed dead, who's in St Mungo's and who's on the run?) - very jealous of that ability. Really looking forward to finding out what happens in the end - how this insane mess gets sorted out (IF it gets sorted out!). I'm glad you don't object to killing off characters, although you have got through quite a lot of them. Stories in which everyone escapes all the time become slightly comical. Plus it must keep the number of characters you have going at a time at a manageable level.

This review is longer than intended - as always! Keep writing!

Leonore

Author's Response: Haha I did actually do that at the beginning,yes! I had a list of characters at the start and color coordinated what I did to/with them as I went along.

I am soo glad to here that, I've been forcing myself to go through chapter with a fine tooth comb trying to pick up mistakes.


I'm really looking forward to what your reactions will be to the later chapters. The next chapter (one of my personal favs) is being validated as we speak.

Thank you for the review!
SiriusAura92
:)



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