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Review:Indigo Seas says:
Gah your reviews are too lovely (and I will respond, I promise!!), I just had to come back. Plus the story is great, obviously, so that's spectacular, too.

AGAIN you just have such an interesting way of putting things. I think that's part of your style as a writer, coming up with different and unique ways to describe varying instances. For example, you say that Rose has "a Weasley complexion" instead of just pointing out that she's pale. I love that. It just makes the sentences fresher and more fun to read.

Your descriptions are great, too. The heat was palpable, and I could visualize her location very clearly. I think my favorite, though, was your detailing of the perfume shop. It's only a small paragraph, but I could really picture it.

You've also got some really great body language thrown in here and there. I don't like a HUGE amount of it - you know, detailing every tiny thing characters are doing - but I think your details are perfect. For instance, the note about "Rose rubbed her thumb while thanking her" really adds a great... I dunno, visualizer? I'm not being really articulate, sorry!

I will definitely be back for more! I love where the story is going, and your pace is fantastic.

xx Rin

Author's Response: Don't worry about how long it takes, I'm just glad you liked it and glad I made you come back here :P

I'm so glad that you like that as I didn't even realise I was doing it until you pointed out. I guess it's because I like observing things and looking at them in different way it helps a lot too.

I'm so glad that you liked the heat and the perfume shop part as they were my favourite ones in the chapter!

I know what you mean about the huge amount, so toeing the line between it is very hard! Don't worry about not being articulate I understood exactly what you were saying, and I'm just so glad you liked it!

Thanks for this fabulous review, Rin!

-Kiana


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