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Review:Courtney Dark says:
This was such an amazing chapter! Though we've only seen one chapter of them, I can already tell that you write Ron and Hermione so well! I could actually picture the two of them, slightly older, in my mind - it was just absolutely perfect.

Hermione was just so Hermione! Even her thoughts were Hermione-ish! (Wow, that sounded very unintelligent) And then when she was thinking about all the things Ron did to try and be romantic - like bringing home the half-eaten chocolate, cook even though he was slightly scared of the toaster and trying to listen to the house elf lectures - I actually burst out laughing. You have this awesome way of injecting humour into the chapter!

And then when Hermione was talking about how the house elves were naming their children Moany and Ninny and how Ron and Harry found it amusing - seriously, you have their personalities absolutely perfect!

Anyway, there's a lot more I could ramble on about, but I think I'll go ahead and read the next chapter.


Author's Response: Ron and Hermione are my OTP! So I put a lot of tender loving care into writing them ;) quite honestly, and Jchrissy will attest to this, Ron and Hermione here have a lot in common with my boyfriend and I. So perhaps that's why they seem quite real here! Haha.

I could just imagine Harry and Ron laughing at Hermione's house-elf efforts resulting in babies named Moany... Bless her.

Not much to say in response to your lovely review, just thank you so much for reading and reviewing... I'm glad you're enjoying it! I appreciate the feedback very much :)

Sarah xo

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