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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey there!

Oh wow, that was an amazing first chapter! It was seriously so sweet and perfect, and I couldn't possibly name one thing that you could improve. I haven't read any stories during the exact time period and so I was pleasantly surprised at just how much I enjoyed it.

Though we haven't seen much of them so far, I really like your portrayal of older Percy and Audrey. So often they are depicted to be this horrible, snobby people who feel like they are above the rest of the Weasley clan, so I am so glad you haven't fallen in that trap! I was actually grinning from ear to ear, imagining Percy with his daughter.

I also love that this first chapter was from Molly's point of view - and the bit with the cake and Fred's name was so sad - what has it been, eight or so years since Fred died? For a mother, that is not long at all, and you portrayed Molly's lingering grief in just the right way.

I am so excited to read more of this little gem, and I am definitely adding this to my favourites!

Author's Response: Hi! What a lovely treat to get these surprise reviews from you! I'm glad you seem to be enjoying the story so much - I just posted chapter 11 this evening, so you have even more to read ;)

This time period really appealed to me, as I was wondering what on earth it was like when this huge next gen all appeared in a short space of a few years! And the characters we know and love are all recovering and moving on, but they're not yet that far removed from the pain and loss of war.

I'd like to think that Percy definitely learned his lesson, and probably had a really tough time coming to terms with the estrangement after the war - losing Fred would really underline the time he wasted being apart from his family. But the Weasleys wouldn't want him to suffer, and I'm sure would have given him all the support and forgiveness he needed to move on and become the happy man I've written here.

Ah, Molly. There was no way, if I was writing a Weasley story, that I could begin with anyone but Molly. She's the centre of the family and I adore her!

Thanks so much for the review, I really appreciate it.


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