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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Wow, this was seriously an incredible chapter! I am already looking forward to seeing how everything we know about the Founders and Helena and Venn - he is the Bloody Baron, isn't he? It's so weird to think of him as a nice person! If he hasn't, well that's awkward - will come together.

The tone of this chapter was amazing, and the language you use gives this perfect feel of the Middle Ages, yet somehow it's not difficult to read at all. I am very, very curious to learn more about Venn - he seems an interesting character! And I really like the fact that Salazar is his uncle, that should make for some interesting plotlines...

Looking forward to reading more!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Yep, Venn is the Bloody Baron - or he will be, anyway. Right now he's just a selfish young noble with no idea what he really wants, which I'm hoping is at least somewhat relatable for the average reader :) I'm glad you don't already hate him, because a lot of people do in these early chapters. He'll hopefully come across as more complex in the future. Salazar will be a part of that.

It's also good that you felt like the language was appropriate. I worked hard on trying to strike a balance between the era and the readability of the chapters.

Thanks for another kind review!

-Amanda


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