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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Oooh, I wasn't happening all this to happen so soon, meaning that I enjoyed this chapter even more than usual!

I honestly didn't think, at the end of last chapter, that this was what Severus was going to do. I thought he was going to try and make himself forget about Beth or Beth forget about him or do something even more drastic like turn her in to the Death Eater's or something. So GO SEVERUS is all I really have to say, YOU ROCK!

Oh, and you wrote Dumbledore perfectly in this chapter! I could seriously picture him in my mind, studying Severus like he was an open book.

And I loved Peter's point of view, too! I'm glad that you felt bad, Peter! Although that does not make up for the fact that you are a dirty, nine fingered (toed? It's confusing when you're a rat and a miserable excuse for a person) rat. And that last line just wrapped the chapter up perfectly!


Author's Response: It's time for the enacting of canon events, yes! And oh MAN, your predictions... I can't say anything about them even though you know what happens already, but were you on the money or what? I think you're the only person without foreknowledge who predicted that! Severus, you really do rock. ♥

I'm glad you liked Dumbledore too! I've found him generally easy/fun to write, because I can tap into him pretty easily, I think. Voldemort and Bellatrix... not so much.

I think he's nine-toed? Who knows, really. He is a very miserable person, but I somehow have sympathy for him, after writing these books. Not a LOT, but more sympathy than I had before writing them. Which was none. :P

Thanks for reviewing!

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