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Review:BLONDEbehaviour says:
Hi there! BLONDEbehaviour here with your requested review!

For an avid Dramione shipper, I really enjoyed this! I liked how we got to see a side to Astoria that we do not usually get to see. I really like how you portrayed her character as more than a barbie doll 'image' person. She had a soul and personality to her, and I really really like that about her, so well done in that regard. I especially like that she cut herself off from the wizarding world to come t terms with the war and such. It showed that she was not a soul-sucking pureblood that had nothing less than that which she was given fro her parents. I hope she doesn't lose this personality of hers!

In portraying her emotions, I think you have done a convincing job. I especially like that she 'lost' her admiration for hi when he became to dabble in dark magic. As I think it makes it more realistic hat someone would lose interest if their crush did something that was bad or not acceptable to that person. So I really liked how you interpreted that.
Draco is definitely going to be an interesting character as the story progresses. I like how we are just slowly introduced to the older him, it gives a bit of mystery to see who and what he has become. I like it!

I am very, very intrigued, and that does not come lightly when Draco is not shipped with Hermione, so this a good sign :) Please re-request when you get the next chapter up!

Please respond to this review, thanks :)

Grace

Author's Response: Grace, hello :)

Well, I guess it would be especially hard to win over Dramione shippers with this one, so woohoo for that :D

I'm glad you like Astoria. I really wanted to establish herself with a strong willed and independent person, rather than a desperate barbie doll-ish girl, as you say!I agree with you, we don't see many stories about her on the archives and I'm glad that I got a chance to try this out. I will certainly continue. Astoria is really growing on me too :)

Eeep. I'm so scared about writing about Draco because JKR has said so much about him, I don't want to mess it up somehow. On the other hand, I'm pleased that you liked the characterization and found it very realistic. I'm glad you liked both of them and how I chose to portray the situation at hand. Thanks ^_^

Wow. That is quite huge! I will re-request as soon as I put up the next chapter.

Thank you so much Grace, your review is amazing :)


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