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Review:Courtney Dark says:
This chapter was full of so much perfection that I don't really know where to start!

Pfft. Of course I do! THAT ENDING! THE KISS! Well, it wasn't quite a kiss but we're getting there! And it was just so sweet and perfect!

And Beth is secret keeper as well? I did not see that coming! And now my mind is whirring and I'm wondering how everything is going to work out with Beth/Sirius/Peter/the betrayal? Does something happen to Beth before Peter betrays them all? I hope not! But then if it doesn't...does she go to Azkaban too? Or flee the country? Does she obtain a fake identity? Is she really Madam Puddifoot in disguise?

I think my theories are becoming a little unlikely.

I loved the moving in to Godric's Hollow scene. Seriously loved it because IT'S GODRIC'S HOLLOW! But there is something so sad about reading James and Lily, when their death is rapidly drawing nearer and nearer. HOLY CRAP! I just realized there's only just over a year until James and Lily died and Sirius goes to Azkaban and Peter rats out and eventually ends up with the Weasleys and Beth becomes Madam Puddifoot! Wow...

When that letter arrived, I actually felt scared, because it reminded me so much of those times I was called to the deans room at school and didn't know whether I was about to be rewarded or reprimanded.

I forgot that Dumbledore can be quite a scary dude. But that scene was absolutely perfect, and I felt so nervous for Beth throughout the whole thing!

Amazing chapter - probably one of my favourites!


Author's Response: The almost-kiss! ♥ Took long enough to happen, right? I do like taking my time with this romance, apparently... but oh well. We'll get there in the end, to tweak what you've just said!

She is indeed a Secret-Keeper, at least for now, and I apologize in advance for the great muddiness of the whole Secret-Keeping thing. It's never clearly outlined in canon, either, and it's very difficult to make canon events happen based around the little that J.K. Rowling told us, so I tried my best to provide some explanations for why things happened as they did. But all of those sad things, should I choose to include them, are very much far away in the future!

Dumbledore can be VERY scary. I have mixed feelings about him, which sometimes got written into these books. :P But he's not that nice, genial, everybody's-friend sort of guy that a lot of people portray him as. He's got a dark side, for sure.

I'm so glad you liked this chapter! Thank you for your review!

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