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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Ooooh, interesting chapter, not what I expected at all!

Oh, Beth! I loved how nervous she was before Severus' arrival, because it just felt so normal and so Beth. And this is kind of random, but I love that she has this habit of rubbing her nose when she's nervous or anxious. Hehe, and I can just imagine Sirius and Peter (I have to keep reminding myself that he's already the rat, grrr) getting out of their quickly when she declared she was having feminine problems.

The conversation between Severus and Beth was perfect - again, I loved the awkward atmosphere between them. And then I really wasn't expecting Severus to tell Beth he'd overheard the prophecy! I wonder what she'll do with the information? And then their hug was a perfect way to end!

And then the James POV at the end was a lovely way to wrap the chapter up - I love getting these glimpses into James and Lily's life, especially with Baby Harry on the way!


Author's Response: I think a lot of Beth's nerves/anxiety came from me, because I have an anxiety disorder -- she's quite anxious a lot of the time, but then again, meeting Severus would freak me out too. :P Her nose-rubbing thing's a habit of mine, too! She's a lot of me put together, and also things I wish I were, if that makes sense at all.

Severus and Beth exist almost solely on unsaid things and awkwardness, but it works for them. ♥ I really do miss writing about them so much, more than I imagined I would (and that was already quite a bit).

Baby Harry! One of my favorite parts of the whole trilogy, as I'm sure you've gleaned by now in BE. He's really too adorable NOT to write, though.

Thanks for reviewing!

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