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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Great chapter!

I really enjoyed the Order of the Phoenix meeting because (I've got a strong feeling I've said this before) I find it super interesting and fascinating finding out what's going on during the First Wizarding War, how all the canon characters are involved, and you do a really good job of writing it! I love that you manage to include so many canon characters, and that we got to see a little more of Marlene in this chapter. I haven't really thought much about Marlene, to be honest, but for some reason I really enjoyed Beth's conversation with her.

And the bit from Severus' point of view was great! The encounter between Severus and just wrote it so perfectly! I could practically hear the tension sizzling, and it kinda reminded me of the argument they had in PoA. You really nailed their characters in this chapter! And I am also very surprised at the end of result of their encounter - and quite proud of Sirius for showing so much restraint!


Author's Response: I know I've said THIS before, but I'm so glad you enjoy Order chapters as much as you do! They weren't ever my favorites to write, with maybe a few exceptions, but of course they were necessary anyway. These books were a very hefty balance of canon and AU, figuring out what needed to fit and what I could throw out for Beth's sake. As it turns out, not that much! (Marlene, I admit, fell to the wayside, as did Mary, which is largely why she crops up here... but I'm glad you liked their talk too.)

SEVERUS AND SIRIUS. ♥ They play so well off each other, in a bad way for both of them and a good way for me and you. ;) I was inspired by PoA in writing this scene, and it makes me happy you saw that!

Sirius knows what'll make Beth happy, and he wants that happiness for her enough to allow it to be with Severus. :)

Thanks for reviewing!

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