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Review:patronus_charm says:
Yay Domís back in the house! Iíve missed her being around as sheís such a laugh and just generally annoying but in a good way! When Clemence was apologising to her it was such a great sign of their friendship and made me feel all warm and gushy about them being friends again and all that stuff. I think the end part of that section really cemented that fact ;)

These girls are really awful! The whole wand drawing and constant questioning, if I was Clemence I would just set Rita on them because it would sort them out. I really love Clemence here because sheís still trying to be all head strong but then thereís a sense of vulnerability and gah sheís just adorable. ♥ The flashback though was truly heart-breaking and her following thoughts and emotions towards Albus were really fitting!

Ooh an update on the Team Rose/Team Dom front! I almost want them to join together and create a super power so they can take Appy and all her dim-witted followers! That would be so awesome, possibly even better than the Battle of Hogwarts. I guess I can see Domís point, and I like the scenes discussing Rose because, again, seeing the vulnerable side of her is adorable and makes me closer to her when she isnít all harsh and domineering.

Clemence is really famous now getting interviewed and everything. I hope this article does sort its self out and that the newspaper doesnít go downhill because she really does need a morale booster after that last encounter. Sheís just so evil and eurgh I just want to rant about her evilness but that would get boring and repetitive so Iíll just stick to doing it mentally.

The last scene. ♥ I think my heart might have broken over that situation it was just so sad to see them like that. They were like injured kittens (weird comparison but works in my mind), though I felt as if both of them, well certainly Clemence, had this fighting spirit about them and how they really are going to take them all down now.

Look at me all caught up and everything now! I can now see it was a brilliant chapter and I canít wait for the next update :D

-Kiana

Author's Response: Bahaha that is my exact sentiments about Dom. Annoying in a good way--my own charm with my friends, I'd like to think :P I have a friend who I cannot get too mushy with at all. Sometimes, we're like, 'why can't we?' and we try for like, two sentences and our cringe faces come on, and we remember why we don't share ~feelings~ ever. That went into that scene 8D

Oh no Rita is definitely a better liar than an aunt, unfortunately xD I also have a habit of writing main characters who are overly independent, and I don't think Clemence would appreciate anyone swooping in, outside of Dom and Pickett. I'm glad you pick up on her vulnerabilities; I was thinking to myself, how do I show that she's not fine but she thinks she's fine despite every piece of evidence telling her that she's not? Even at the end of the panic attack, she refuses Albus' help, refuses to acknowledge she has a problem.

Ooh the interview is a bit of a ploy. Janey's part of Witchy Business staff, so Clemence is manufacturing her own PR. When you have a monopoly on the school's newspaper business, you take advantage of it 8D

Wah, injured kittens! Now that's a play for my heart. It's a desperate, reluctant, angry fighting spirit but a fighting spirit indeed!

♥ Kiana, thank you so much for reading and reviewing the whole story; it's been amazing to follow your thoughts and your crazy sleep-deprived nights :D


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