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Review:patronus_charm says:
Ah, it's been so long! Silly school :P Sorry if the review proves to be rushed/garbled, I should be asleep but I couldn't stay from this any longer!

The aftermath of it was excellent! First, I was just on the same level as Clemence and thinking the F word too and was tempted to run around screaming about it, then we get to find the identity of the person in between her and Al and I just couldn't stop laughing! Haha, I guess the rumous about those two are true :P

Yay Hagrid! I thought he was great and you wrote him really well, which is something very hard to come by! I almost thought he was going to threaten to write to Harry and Ginny about what Al was getting up to but from what you've said about James and Lily I guess this is tame! The whole awkward conversation when Clemence and Al were picking the plant was brilliant and I just wanted to die from the cringiness of it all!

WQahaha - how I feel about what just happened! So Albus loves Clemence but then she goes and rejects and it like hahaha I'm cold hearted and I will never love, then Scorpius goes and throws the Bombshell which deserves to be capitalised (I mean, I knew but I never thought he would admit it. That resulted in me cheer leading them about them being true about themselves (ok, that might only be correct in Scorpius' case as the Clemence/Al thing is still confusing, then everyone starts going for Scorpius about the whole Dom/Rose thing.

Gah, I blame all of this on Scorpius. If he had just been honest about himself it would not have involved him dating Rose and the whole Dom stealing him then the rival wars. But he's so cute ♥ I take that back, Team Scorpius for ever!

I guess all that drama over Scorpius was nothing over what happened with Clemence! That was crazy! Haha, I can't wait to see the consequences of this and how she might actually have to be nice to Al now. I wouldn't be surprised if she ditches him due to all the death glares she gets from Appy. Ooh and the whole Quirky Girl take over is over now I'm guessing as the whole Team Clemence thing needs to be fought over.

An awesome chapter!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Wah! Well I reached 900 in favorites so it's a collective something-hundred party. As long as I'm guilty of causing sleep-deprivation c:

Dom's always called Pickett 'Henry'! It's only Clemence who calls Pickett 'Pickett'. Hopefully I'm consistent about these things, because sometimes even I forget xD Like Clemence calls Albus 'Potter' when talking directly to him, but generally refers to him as 'Albus' when talking to other people and weird details like that. Albus is the only one who changes so far; he starts calling Clemence by her first name riiight around now.

Hagrid is just the most awkward per square inch of human-giant, and there's a lot of square inches on him :D He knows about the birds and bees too well, caring for creatures, welp, he doesn't get to be surprised by the subject often.

I love reading your commentary on how everything's going nuts in earlier chapters, and then this chapter takes those nuts and starts flinging them around in a food fight over a gay bloke stopped only by Clemence kissing Albus in full view of everyone causing an even bigger food fight and pending war. The crazy only spirals downwards.

Poor, pathetic Scorpius, perpetually downtrodden, at least in me and Julia's stories. It really is his fault, but I can't entirely blame him either. I'll just pat his head and place him on the mantelpiece to admire.

♥!


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