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Review:missclaire17 says:
Hello! Before I start off, I just want to say that I normally don't read stories that are so AU (like when James and Lily live or if Sirius had never gone to Azkaban, etc.) because it makes me even sadder about what happened to the Marauders, but I decided to read your story here, and I was hooked!

There are so many parts in your novel that I want to comment on (I wish I had left you a review on every single chapter), such as: how different of a person Draco is simply because he had been taught/raised differently. I also love how you portray Lucius and Narcissa's marriage; you portrayed it wonderfully! I loved all of the Remus and Tonks moments (I really disliked Keith...) and I'm just waiting for the two of them to get together because I love them so much. The way that you wrote Sirius, Harry, and Kreacher was just brilliant. You left this at such a cliffhanger, and if there's one suggestion I would like to make, it would be that the whole Snape and Sirius and the Whomping Willow incident be explained before Sirius's trial. Nevertheless, I'm sure you'll do a wonderful job. I know Sirius will have a job trying to talk to Harry; the poor kid feels betrayed, although I wish Harry would have just asked Sirius about it in the first place. I love hearing the anecdotes and funny stories that Remus and Sirius exchange about their school days, and you wrote their post-James and Lily death relationship perfectly. I was surprised to read that Harry's Animagus form would be a wolf; of course that could be just because we know his Patronus is a stag in the book, so I had expected Harry to be a stag as well, though the explanation about how the antlers wouldn't have fit Harry did make sense. I supposed that I just never thought as far about Harry being an Animagus. A wolf made a lot of sense, and it's rather nice because Remus is a werewolf. Which brings me to say, I don't trust Sarah/Greentooh one bit. Debbie makes me sad, though her being a Muggle definitely makes her sentiments more understandable. I'm glad that Remus has found a confidant in Matthew, who is also a werewolf.

I will be looking forward to your next update, and although I'm sorry I couldn't leave you a review on everything that I loved, I do want to say that I didn't think it was possible for me to hate Peter Pettigrew/Wormtail more than I already do but you managed to make me do that. Just reading about the life that Sirius, Remus, and Harry could have had makes me so sad to a point that although I want to focus the blame on Voldemort (because he IS to blame), Peter betrayed his best friends. URGH! :(

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