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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Meg,
Oh my stars, no! He stole a rose from Draco's deceased mother's rose bush?! Gasp! A very serious error on his part! And I loved how you mentioned why it was so important to Draco to not be seen... of course the Ministry would get involved and Granger-Weasley would stick her nose in it as well. His Slytherin self-preservation will not allow the man to leave. He has seen too much. It makes sense and ties in really well with the HP universe.

And poor Nicholas just wanted a rose to take to Belle. Ah, but he shouldn't have taken a Malfoy rose! His heart was in the right place though.

I also like how you tied the sisters into Hogwarts as well and how they sort-of knew the trio and who Draco was as well as his reputation.

I loved how you described the storm in the distance and I would've been sick if my carriage bounced me around in the air like that. Ugh. I'd be turning several shades of green for sure.

Wow, I think you did a great job with the mystery and intrigue of Malfoy Manor. Of course if things were covered up, I'd probably try to see them as well. LOL! :)

Great job on this HP spin on Beauty and the Beast. I think it would be really difficult to write, but you are doing a wonderful job!

Until next time...
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Hey Dark,

I had to make the Rose bush meaningful and the one person Draco cares for without a single doubt is his mother.

I worte the books in to give the castle an over all enchanted feel but I think I completely missed the mark. I had a comment that the books seemed like something out of the Page master and now I can't get the picture of those goofy animated books out of my head. I'd feel too much like a copy cat of disney if I made the Candlesticks and Clocks talk. I'm stuck so if you have any ideas on how to make it magical without being a copycat let me know. I could use your insight.

Anyway, I know the carriage ride was rough but he made it out in one piece luckily.

Thank you for an awesome review. I look forward to hearing from you again.

Meg


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