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Review:toomanycurls says:
I'm a bit unfamiliar with Astoria and Draco canon facts so I won't be much good on keeping that in line. However, I like how you set her up as a younger student who admired Draco from afar. I could see why he'd be quite the elusive and attractive man while he was a student. Quite popular, rich, and good looking.

Brooding male version of the damsel in distress? That was brilliant. ^_^

I really like her progression through the war and wanting to distance herself from the death eaters (and Draco). Even more interesting that she removed herself form the wizarding world.

ooh, her sister must be good looking to have married Blaise. A wedding is a great reason for Astoria to get pulled back into the wizarding world.

Hmm, I'm a bit curious why Astoria had the sudden courage to talk to Malfoy. Was she stronger, braver, or just didn't care about impressing him?

I kind of think Draco would have been invited to the wedding anyway. He's friends with Blaise after all.

Please feel free to re-request when the next chapter is out. I like the flow of the story so far. It was a good back story. I'm interested to see what interactions draw Draco and Astoria together.

Author's Response: Hello :) I think everyone is a teensy bit unfamiliar with this ship, especially because there are so many Dramione shippers out here! :P

Haha, yep! Rich, popular, good-looking. Dreamy girls would just swoon, I'd bet.

Really? Aw, thanks :)

It definitely is interesting behaviour, I'd hope. Because it would be really hard for a pureblood to extricate herself from the world of magic. It must have really affected tremendously.

I'm glad you liked the reason I chose. You wouldn't miss a sister's wedding would you? I mean, unless you're Petunia :/

I think I should explain that a little. Thank you for pointing it out :)

He probably would have been. But she wants to bring him with her, if she gets the courage to ask him.

Yay :) Thank you! I'll make sure to re-request! Lovely review :)


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