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Review:AlexFan says:
This was definitely a new way of looking at Draco and Astoria. I've never read a story about them that was written in this way before. I actually really liked this.

I like how it was like I was reading a fairytale, it sounded like Astoira was writing a letter to Draco telling him everything that had happened with her, or she was sharing the story with Scorpius about how she and his father met.

Personally, I'm definitely looking forward to the rest of this.

And you can definitely see the feelings that Astoria has for Draco. It definitely sounds exactly like a first love type of thing. You notice a boy and you watch them from afar and hope that some day they'll notice you and you can't stop thinking about them. I'm sure that a lot of people have felt this way when they first got a crush on someone or had their first love.

You can see that Astoria really likes Draco even though she left the wizarding world but I also like how, as much as she likes him, she isn't going to put her life on hold and sit around and wait for him. To me it showed that she was the type of person who was strong, no matter how cowardly she was when it came to the war, and that no matter how much she loved a boy/man, she wouldn't let them rule her life and stick around waiting for them.

I also like how an old part of Draco seemed to come through as soon as he realised that it was Astoria. One moment he's this drunk, sad person and then when he realises that he's talking to Astoria some of his old swagger seems to come back to him.

Anyway, I thought this was really interesting and great and awesome job on it!

Author's Response: Hi there :) I'm sorry I took so long to get to this. I've been a bit tied up lately.

I'm glad you found this original. I know that there aren't too many stories about them. I've hardly come across any myself, actually!

Haha, you might have made an interesting observation there :P If you stick on, you might see.

Yay! :) I'm happy to hear that you are ^_^

That was EXACTLY what I was going for. Sometimes, you have your first crush and you never quite forget, but over time you forget the intensity. Then one day, you come across them again in some form and you remember everything and you can't let it go. It's simple love. But it's real.
(I'll probably use that later on in this story, lol :P)

That was another thing I wanted to show and I'm glad you picked up on it. She isn't weak, nor is she desperate. She loves him but she is completely robbed of her judgement because of it.

Haha :) It seems as if you've picked up on everything I wanted to show in this chapter. It makes me so very happy :)

Thanks for the review! :D

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