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Review:Lululuna says:
Review tag! :)

First of all, I love the descriptions of Brienne's relief at being with her father, and the relationship you've built up between them. I liked the explanation about how she wasn't used to seeing her father often, and how they have this sort of long-distance family relationship which now might get a chance to change since his home is now her permanent home. It's so sad that it was brought about because of her mother's death, but I'm happy Brienne has a such an awesome, supportive dad to be there for her.

I like the descriptions of the house as well, and how they have a fire - that's so wizard of them! :P Also, I'm curious as to what Brienne's grandmother did that was notable? And of course, the food descriptions are as mouth-watering and wonderful as always.

I like how Brienne is trying to appear as an adult to her father, and insisting that she is ready to know about the investigation. I can imagine how frustrating it would be, to have lived through this loss and grow up so fast, yet still be babied and taken care of. Her snapping at her father about his losing her mother was very realistic and fit well following the story of how they met, and I thought there might have been some bitterness about the actual divorce there (though perhaps that's reading between the lines a little too much!).

It's funny how for such a domestic and pleasant chapter, I think this is one of the pivotal chapters of your story which gets the mystery and plot being set up to be addressed in the following chapters. You definitely make the reader eager to find out more about Brienne's family and the confusion surrounding her mother's death. :)

Another wonderful chapter! :D

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for the lovely review!

Brienne loves her dad a lot, and is a lot closer to his personality than she was to her mother, so they connect rather well. Obviously the issue of the investigation is hard for her, and a little of her mother's fire comes out in Brienne at times.

Brienne's grandma is sadly passed, but was an influential lady at the Ministry :) One of the first lady ministry workers!

Thank you very much for the lovely review, and you have more interaction between Brienne and her father in the few next chapters.


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