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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Review Tag!

This is a really nice beginning to a story. I like writing about what happens to the characters Post-War, and Draco stories are a lot of the time based around Hermione in some respect.

I like that this is based on Astoria and not Draco. Her feelings and thoughts, and her life. The backstory is very important to her character, and I think I'd like to see a little more on why exactly she left the Wizarding World and how this affected her life and relationships, though I expect that will be explored in the future :)

I saw a couple of typos that could be fixed just with a read-through :) Other than that, great job!

Author's Response: Hello again :)

It's the first time I'm doing this era, and I'm liking it already. I'm a canon freak, as I waste no breath in telling. So, I wouldn't do a Dramione, no offense. But I do like Draco and I was more than happy to explore this. I'm glad you seem to like Astoria. I was hoping that she'd be received well. I agree with you. The backstory makes the character and strengthens it. I will be exploring that more in the future. Worry not :) I know that there are typos, and I really need to fix them soon.

Thanks for the review :)


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