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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Aaagh, another amazing chapter! I am so sad that I can't keep reading now, because everything is just so perfect and delicious and fantastic! Those probably weren't quite the words I was looking for but, once again, I am writing this very quickly.

I really, really enjoyed the scene from James' point of view, and how many of the things we know about he and Lily and their life pre-Harry is starting to come together. It's very exciting!

And then the scene from Severus' point of view was great, too. I wasn't sure who that haughty man was going to be, and now I really, really don't like Travers for spilling that piece of news. Then again, I REALLY like Severus and he spilled an even bigger piece of information. I should probably get my priorities straight.

I also think you wrote Bellatrix really well, especially because we know that she and Severus don't get on, from the HP books.

Great chapter!

Author's Response: I promise I'm going to respond to all of your ITR reviews today! ;) You keep leaving them so fast, I'm dizzy trying to stay on top of them! Not a complaint, of course -- I really am grateful. ♥

I'm glad you like James! I'm always happy when people do, since he is my favorite, and I wonder sometimes if that showed in writing him. :P Ah, and this was the point when you didn't know what was yet to come... but I digress, and anyway, you know now, eh?

Bellatrix is a total witch. In the worst sense of the word. Which trumps the fact that I find her intimidating to write, and makes it fun!

Thank you for reviewing!

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