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Review:Courtney Dark says:
I love the fact that there were so many Severus chapters, because I think you are doing at excellent job at writing all these canon events and making them so real - I know that if I was trying to write a Severus based story I would never have been able to do it justice - but you most definitely have!

There is so much I could say about this chapter, but I really don't know how to word it - Severus' first encounter with Voldemort was written absolutely perfectly, and I feel like all these little canon events are beginning to come into place, and I love it!

I also enjoyed Severus' encounter with Peter, simply because it was just so interesting! And now I have to go and read more - apologies for all these pathetically short reviews, just know that I am finding this story so exciting and gripping - I always want to know what will happen next!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: I couldn't help including so many Sev chapters in a row. I just love him! :) I'm so, so pleased that you found this string of canon chapters to be generally accurate, although I'm sure you'd be able to do is justice, too. I'm just SO PLEASED that people think I've done one of my all-time favorite characters justice!

I think I intentionally left Voldemort out of the picture until now to build a sort of suspense, and now I think about it, he doesn't really appear in the trilogy as a whole all that much. He's much more fearful in the shadows, just like in canon.

Oh my gosh, please don't feel the need to apologize for your reviews! ♥ If anything, it's these responses that need apologies -- they are hopelessly pathetic, but I am trying to convey my sheer gratitude. I'm so glad you're enjoying it so much!

Thank you for reviewing!!


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