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Review:lily16 says:
I just about have a heart attack every time you I wouldn't be surprised if all the excitement from this story has taken a few months off my life. thank you so much for writing this :DDD

oh my god.

Okay, now I'll go and actually read the chapter (!!!)

...Wow. That was really good. They're sort of actually together now?? Wow. Somehow I still can't believe that conversation happened, even after 45 freaking chapters. I loved James is the first to admit that he doesn't regret sleeping with her, and Aggy explaining why they might work together, and James saying he admires her (omg), and finally both of them letting go of their fears and actually taking the plunge. They were both so brave and mature in that conversation; it really showcases how well they've matured. And the allusion to the first chapter was perfect.

I wasn't very surprised by anything they had to say, but for the first time I think I have a good idea of what James was thinking throughout this whole story. I sort of misjudged him because even though I knew he cared a lot about Aggy's well being I thought he acted the way he did mainly to protect himself from another heartbreak, I didn't think he was trying to protect her the same way. Aww :) And obviously he always cared about her opinion of him, but it's a whole nother story to think that he sees her as a girl to be admired and looked up too...that gives more definition to certain scenes. Personally, I think they'll fall in love pretty quickly from here ;)

And finally, I have to say that I loved the way you wrote that conversation. Which is a shock to me because the main reason I love this story so much is because Aggy and James' interactions have always been so richly detailed and in your face emotional that you actually feel like you're with them in the story. Aggy's always trying to catch the tinniest bit of emotion in James and she's so aware of his body language and her own emotions. So I would have expected to be disappointed about the fact that their most important conversion, the one we've all been waiting for, is only dialogue.but I'm not because it was perfect that way. It's like Aggy and James are truly listening to what the other has to say without judgement or anything else in the brings home the point that they're laying the truth bare. And it's sort of nice that they have a certain degree of privacy in this one scene. The kiss was beautiful btw.

Wow this is turning out to be a pretty long review! Obviously this story's coming to a close soon but I really hope we get to see a tiny bit of Jaggy acting like a couple before the end...I'm really interested to see how their physical attraction, respect, and bickering work together in a relationship.

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