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Review:toomanycurls says:
This is an amazing chapter. I haven't followed all of the JKR reveals in the past few years so I had to do a fast 'huh' and check out Molly Weasley. Then this made perfect sense.

I love how she's depicted. I can only imagine how horrified Percy must be to have a daughter who plays quidditch and has a mohawk. She kind of reminds me of Lisbeth Salander from the Millennium Trilogy. ^_^ Though, hopefully Molly doesn't have the same tragic past.

I really like that you used familiar surnames for the characters. It completely fits that McCormack's daughter would be a professional quidditch player. I like the other OCs here - they're developed enough to feel real without being over-developed for an introduction.

^_^ definitely reading the new chappy!

Author's Response: Ah yes - Molly is the elder daughter of Percy and Audrey Weasley. Her sister is Lucy. I follow the canon Weasley family tree that JKR drew up for the Next Gen kids, and then I pair them up how I like them ;) Victoire (Bill's daughter) and Teddy Lupin are married and have several kids at this point. Rose is together with Scorpius Malfoy and has a kid, though they're not married. I've got three novels and several shorter pieces on those two.

Percy is not so pleased with the wild hair, but he overlooks it because she's a successful, professional Quidditch player, former prefect and Head Girl, and all that he's very pleased with. Percy was a big Quidditch fan in canon so I think he'd be chuffed that he was the only one of the Weasley kids to produce a pro player (Ginny having retired by this point). I haven't read the Lisbeth Salander books, so I don't really have a comment for that. :)

Meghan McCormack is a canon character (from Quidditch Through the Ages), who played for Pride of Portree in the 1990s. Her mother Catriona also played for the Prides, as Chaser and captain, and played on the Scotland team 36 times. And of course, her brother Kirley is in the Weird Sisters. I love to throw in lesser known canon characters. Good eye to pick them out!

Thank you so much for the review!


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