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Review:nott theodore says:
Thank goodness! I don't know why I was worried about how Tonks would react to Remus telling her that he's a werewolf (I'm going to say it's because you're a great writer rather than anything to do with my intelligence) because she marries him, but I was worried. And her reaction was perfect, because even though I didn't know what to expect it was so Tonks that I realised of course that's what she'd say. Really, I'm pretty envious of how you write her. She'd be fun to have in my head as well.

Remus's reaction when Tonks took the news really calmly was so cute. I could really tell how much it meant to him to be able to tell someone that he's a werewolf and not to watch them run away screaming. It should probably have been a warning to him that she's not the sort of person to give up when she realises that she does actually love him.

Ooh, this date is going to be interesting. Amina is such a fun character for Tonks to work with, and I'm intrigued to see what sort of person she'll set Tonks up with. And if it'll be anyone we know...

Aw, Sirius was so merry to have the Christmas party (and also because of some drinks, perhaps). I thought you portrayed his character really well in this, and it reminded me of his happiness to have Harry and the Weasleys in the house over the holidays. He's a sneaky one, though, playing matchmaker...

Pahaha poor Remus and Tonks! There's no way that their first kiss would have actually been romantic, or anything more than awkward because Tonks has got herself into another clumsy situation. And I loved how oblivious and confused she was afterwards, not understanding why she felt the way she did after the kiss. It suited her character so well.

And I can't end this review without a couple of my favourite bits:
"People didn't immediately run away screaming when they found out how weird I was. Well, actually there was this incident when I made myself look like a banshee for a laugh."
"I had one incident of being at a Christmas party, and the person I had been hugging had drunk several fire whiskey shots beforehand. That meant we were left hugging for a whole three minutes. Everyone was staring. It was horrible."
How on earth do you manage to come up with these things? They're hilarious!

Sian :)

Author's Response: Haha, I'll go with great writer too, because I'm sure you were intelligent enough to realise that ;) Aw, thank you! You should definitely try out writing her because it's so much fun and so easy to do (well, for me :P). I'm glad that you liked both of their reactions because it was rather nerve-wrecking wondering what everyone else will think of it, so hearing you say that calmed me down a lot!

Haha, it's not anyone you know and it doesn't all go to plan but that's all I'll say for now :P

I'm glad that you liked Sirius here as I'm worried I tend to be a little bipolar when I come to his character so he's always depressed or insanely happy! Of course he would try and play matchmaker.

I'm so glad that you liked the kiss because writing one for such an awkward couple as those two is really hard! I think (from what I remember) their next one goes considerably more smoothly.

To be honest, I'm not entirely sure how I came up with those lines either. I think it was just the JulNo related madness which made me want to write every single thing in my head to boost the word count.

Thanks again for another amazing review! :D


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