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Review:StellaRose says:
Gah, I wanna know what happens so bad! Why does your story have to be so addicting? WHY? lol.

I don't know if I like the whole Louis med thing to be honest. I don't think it took anything away from the story but it also didn't add anything to it. Does that make sense?

This line---> The party was over and I had spent the last hour and a half doing everything in my power to run away from Albus. I think by the third time that I dodged him, and nearly knocked over a punch bowl, he got the idea that I couldnít talk to him at the moment.

Too funny and it was my favorite quote. Not gonna lie, I really wanted him to catch up to her so they could talk it out. Now I think it's just going to be mega awkward when they do meet up. Sigh. Oh well, that's Bri for you. (BTW, loved the scene where she blurted out that she kissed Al. Classic.)

Keep up the good work!

Until the next chapter,

Emmy

Author's Response: I'm not sure, Stella! I guess it's want pulls you guys in ;)

I agree with you. It was a last minute addition because I was planning on having Louis's character be so completely different in this story.

I'm glad that it was your favorite quote. That would have been funny if Albus had managed to track her down even though she used her ninja skills to avoid him. I loved that scene too!

Thank you!


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