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Review:Aphoride says:
Hey there - glad to see you stop by again! :)

Dominique is such a fabulous character - she reacts so normally to things, you know? She's angry when most people would be angry, she's sad when people would be sad... she doesn't necessarily think rationally about things, she struggles to deal with difficult things... I know I've said this before, but it's so good! :)

I love Teddy, as well. I like how he supports her, and goes along with her, and gets Harry to help and not ask questions, and how he convinces Young to help them bring Delilah down. The way he switches from almost attacking the other werewolf when he raises his wand at Dom to wanting to help him and offering legal aid and things if he helps them is so lifelike. If you are going to include anything like that and you want to know about it, feel free to pm me, incidentally, since I'm a law student ;) I'll be happy to help!

But yeah, they're all such brilliant characters! The only person who I think isn't as developed as the others (because even Young has a understandable motive and good backstory and is a good character) is Delilah herself. Obviously she's not necessarily evil, as such, but willing to go to a hugely extreme length to get what she wants. Up til now she's kind of seemed to be a standard sort of villain, you know, so I'd love to see more of her and how she thinks and why she did it and things. I'm sure she'll be just as good as the others! :)

Plot-wise, I love how it's coming along, with Dom finishing her article anyway, going to work to confront Delilah, meeting the werewolf who bit her. She's starting to organise things in her life, and get herself back on track and I love that. It's a very human response - mope, then get on with it - and makes perfect sense.

So yeah, there's really nothing wrong with this at all - the characterisation is great, the plot is lovely, the writing is excellent, pace and style are great... everything's great :P Seriously, no problems at all! I'm still really enjoying this!

Feel free to re-request in the future! :)

Aph xx

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reading and reviewing =)

I am pleased you liked Dom's character and find her reactions believable. Your comments make me happy!

Teddy is amazing, isn't he? xD I am glad you like the way he handles everything and it looks lifelike to you. Thank you so much for offering help, I'll approach you if I need anything!

Of course, we haven't seen Delilah's side of the story yet, and I am not sure how much I'll be able to show since it's from Dom's point of view which is bound to be somewhat biased, but you'll definitely be seeing her motives in the next chapter (which is already in the queue) and maybe that will help you get to know her better. I hope you find her character developed too! *fingers crossed*

Dom is the kind of person who wouldn't leave her work unattended, so she did the article anyway. I am pleased you think the way she is dealing with stuff seems human, thanks.

I am so flattered after reading your review, thank you so much for your kind words. I'll surely re-request!

Cheers!
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