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Review:MadiMalfoy says:
Here's review #2 for your TMR challenge prizes! :)

Well, I really shouldn't have read this just before bed, because now I'm really sad. :( But in a good way..I guess? I don't know, it's late!

Anyways, this nearly brought me to tears. The way you've kept Tonks' personality and voice consistent and very apparent throughout made this that much better! The first person POV works perfectly in this one-shot, I'm so jealous! You have great talent in writing first person, which can sometimes be a very hard thing to do, considering you have to be able to get into the mindset of the character perspective you're writing from.

As for plot, I think the structure you used works well. It keeps it sort of lighthearted (hehe, get it?) yet still talks about a serious topic. And you highlighted her and Remus' deaths!! Oh, that makes me happy! It bugged me they didn't show how they died in the movie, or in the book even, so thank you for taking the time to write that scene! You use great similes and metaphors as well, so great job on that!

Just phenomenal, really! Thank you for entering in my challenge, and I loved your entry, and these as well! :)
~MadiMalfoy x

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