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Review:patronus_charm says:
Ah Appy, Dom and Rose are all currently vying for the scariest person in Hogwarts title. I dread to think who will, as all of them seem to be getting worse and worse without a sign of them not being scary at all in the horizon. I’m curious to see whether Clemence actually goes through with this manuscript, but I suppose it all depends on Al. Then there’s what she’s going to say about the whole who will end up with Scorpius debacle which is yet to reach its conclusion, so many exciting things!

I wouldn’t be half surprised to find out that Appy was the one who was behind that graffiti in the toilets. I’m starting to think that Albus’ mad plan of taking over the Quirky Girls is probably a good idea. I mean, this stuff isn’t particularly nice and now all these evil hints from people like Appy and Caroline it makes me wonder whether they’re planning on taking over Witchy Business. I guess they would require a certain level of intellect to make that possible, but you never know, it could be possible :P

Oh, Merlin, I was right! They’re just so evil doing that to her. I mean, yeah she did write about them in the not nicest of ways but attempted murder is no way to resolve problems like that. Come on, take a leaf out of Gandhi’s book and throw your own Salt March or have a hunger strike, not attacking people in toilets! Gah, Albus though! I really wanted to hit him when he was playing on with those Quirky girls then there was that lovely tender moment afterwards which made me like him again. If Albus is playing with my emotions I dread to think how Clemence is feeling :P

So Rose is being devious now? I almost thought that her and Scorpius were back together then, but I have to say I’m a little glad that they’re not because Rose is a little too evil in this for me to ship them.

This line ‘The dreamboat Malfoy, who has been flapping his arms and making bedsheet angels, lifts his head. ‘ I may have died a little!

Gah Clemence go and break mine and Al’s heart why don’t you? I don’t even know what to say as I thought they might have actually reached an understand with one another with them being in the room alone and that they might just begin plotting the downfall and then she goes and drops that bombshell and ruins it all. I’ll just sit here in the corner and sulk.

Ah she’s printing it! Hell is most probably going to break loose. Another awesome chapter!


Author's Response: I have a terrible tendency to jumpstart all my plots like halfway into the fic--suddenly ALL THE SUBPLOTS. I think it's more prominent when you're reading through all the chapters at once (especially since I edited it recently), because you're one of the few to really hone in on other girls' machinations :D Witchy Business itself might be in more danger than Clemence realizes.

Omg baahaha, I'm just imagining what Gandhi would think of this whole debacle. Or Hogwarts hunger strikes, against gossip! I don't think these students are organized enough to form a straight line, let alone peacefully assemble. They are, however, quite ruthless like Clemence (though in a different way). Everyone's scary and desperate! A bit like cornered predators. It adds an element of suspense, I hope, as Clemence becomes less and less invincible.

Rose is ambiguous! Everyone is ambiguous! :D

Clemence and Albus are unhappy! Everyone is unhappy! :D This was one of my favorite bits of angst to write though, gahh. I'm a fluff girl, but this fic makes me want characters to /hurt/.

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